story consulting
If you’re here, you probably have an idea you want to bring to life—or maybe you’ve already wrestled it onto the page and are now trying to make it more like what you imagined. Whatever stage you’re at, and whatever your level of experience, I can help you move forward. I invite you to read my testimonials to see what others have said about working with me.
My process starts with a lot of listening and thoughtful questions. If you have a complete or partial manuscript, I’ll provide in-depth notes, including detailed line-by-line comments; if you have the seed of an idea, I’ll work with you to develop it so you can move forward with confidence; if you simply feel the urge to write, I can demystify the writing process and help you explore your creativity freely; for organizations, I help craft simple, compelling, and effective stories and copy.
Working with me means collaborating with an actively working writer, someone who has been writing and developing stories for over 20 years. As a creative consultant, I’ve advised novelists, playwrights, graphic novelists, software developers, and of course, screenwriters. I also have many years of experience as an educator, with degrees in teaching, literature, and writing.
If you want to explore the possibilities, drop me a line and schedule a15–20 minute call with me. I have found it best for both the client and me not to list prices here since every project is unique. I look forward to hearing from you. Keep at it.
FICTION WRITERS
If you've found your way here from the world of fiction, welcome. Story is story — and the questions I ask a novelist aren't so different from the ones I ask a screenwriter. Where does the tension live? What does this character actually want, and what are they afraid to admit? Why does this scene exist?
I've worked with novelists, graphic novelists, and memoir writers at various stages — from early drafts trying to find their shape to near-complete manuscripts that need a clear outside eye. I bring the same close attention I give to every project: the slow, fully-engaged read, the honest notes, the conversation that helps you see your own work more clearly.
SCREENwriters
As a screenplay consultant, I approach every script with the care and focus I'd give my own. I've come to realize that I'm a slow reader — in the best way possible. My development and revision brain is fully engaged from the first page, which is why my feedback always includes a mix of detailed and overarching thoughts, questions, and suggestions. Here's what you can expect:
I deeply read and take notes on your screenplay over a 3–4 hour period.
I provide my unique blend of page and line notes, along with 3–4 pages of organized feedback that includes specific pitches and actionable suggestions for your revision.
We schedule a 75-minute call to dive into the notes and discuss your script in detail. Along the way, if you need professional advice, I'm happy to offer it when I can.
What makes my page notes unique? As I read, I insert unfiltered comments, questions, and suggestions directly into your document — a live stream of my reactions as a reader. Writers of all levels find it invaluable to see how their story lands in real time. My notes are immediate and honest, which means I don't sugarcoat every observation. Some comments may come across as blunt, but that's the point: you get raw, actionable insights to strengthen your script.
My Signature Q&A Consultation
This low-stakes session is the result of years spent supporting collaborators, clients, students, and friends. During our 90 minutes together, you'll simply share your story — just start talking — while I engage with questions and suggestions drawn from what you share. It's an organic, conversational process, and one that clients, mentees, and friends alike find surprisingly effective. More often than not, it unearths both problems and solutions, bringing clarity to the core elements of your story and revealing actionable pathways forward.
One on One STORY Development
This offering is designed to support you through the process of writing your manuscript. It includes 6 90 minute sessions tailored to your specific needs and the stage of your project. Each writer and story is unique, so this is a fully bespoke experience aimed at maximizing your creative momentum. The journey begins with a 30-minute session where we set realistic goals and intentions to guide the development process. My role is to then provide ongoing feedback and actionable advice to help you stay on track as you write. This program is ideal for writers who are in the midst of drafting or preparing to start writing their story—not for those with a completed draft.